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HAMBURGER PARAGRAPHS

HAMBURGER

How to write a really great paragraph

The Topic Sentence (Top Bun)

         Very first sentence of your paragraph.

         Always needs to be indented.

         Tells what your paragraph is going to be about.

There are many reasons that I love to teach.  First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.  Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly.  A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids.  These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

The First Detail (Lettuce) supporting ideas

         Should not be the most important detail.

         Needs to follow directly after the topic sentence.

         Needs to be full of good “lettucy” details!

There are many reasons that I love to teach.  First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.  Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly.  A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids.  These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

The Second Detail (Tomato)

         Still should not be the most important detail.

         Needs to follow directly after the lettuce sentence.

         Needs to be full of good “juicy” details

 There are many reasons that I love to teach.  First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.  Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly.  A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids.  These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

The Third Detail (Cheese)

         Still not be the most important detail.

         Needs to start differently than other sentences.

         Needs to be full of good “cheesy” details!

There are many reasons that I love to teach.  First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.  Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quicklyA third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids.  These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

The Last Detail (Meat)

         Finally!!  The most important detail.

         Should start differently than most of the other sentences.

         Needs to be full of good “meaty” details!

There are many reasons that I love to teach.  First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.  Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly.  A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids.  These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

The Closing Sentence  (Bottom Bun)

         Should look a lot like the topic sentence.

         Needs to summarize the topic.

         Needs to be an obvious end to the sentence.

There are many reasons that I love to teach.  First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.  Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly.  A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kidsThese are just a few reasons I love to teach.

 
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Posted by on January 2, 2014 in Reading I

 

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